Thursday, February 22, 2007

At Work: Wordsmiths

R:
She used to say that I paint with my eyes.
She got married last night.
I burned all my canvasses.

Me:
I look at my henna stained palms.
Was it she who sat smiling,
Coyly before the holy flames?

R:
I am defeated.
A fake wordsmith.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

I loved that.

Anonymous said...

i love your lines....sarmila.

Anonymous said...

sarmila again. My id nsarmila.ila@gmail.com

Anonymous said...

sarmila again. sorrt, i didnt introduce myself to u. i am the friend of thulasi das ,photo blogger from ernakulam. will u mail me back?

kim said...

stopping by to let you know I'm thinking of you -- any adventures to report?

I should check the photo blog before asking...

--Love

Muhammed Naumaan Shah said...

It is really good.